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Old 28-05-2008, 07:49 AM
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Bandstand in Colchester Park Essex




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Old 28-05-2008, 07:54 AM
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I was only thinking yesterday how you can get good shots in bad weather (no harsh sunlight), and as we have had a lot of bad weather recently it seems an ideal time. I like this shot, but it might have had a little more interest with a figure seated on the (wet) bench, perhaps just staring at the bandstand?
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Many thanks for your constructive comment,I appreciate it. I couldn't find a volunteer to sit on the wet bench. I will take your suggestion on board for another time
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