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Old 27-05-2008, 07:09 PM
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Sorry, but I love dark work at the moment, seems to suit my mood..
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Old 27-05-2008, 07:47 PM
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Wow...this is a riveting composition. If there are ways to make it better, I'm not the one to ask. According to personal taste, some may want more detailing but I say you got something pretty nice, here.
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Thanks for the comment Fay, I liked this image in its origional state, but I'm going through a "dark phase" and loved it with this editing.
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Pete you sure are gonna miss Gen when she leaves the county.

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I like it 99%.
It stands out as a thumbnail so I zoomed in for a closer look. i like the toning and the angle you shot from is really good mate. The whole image is nicely balanced but the lighter area of the robe is a bit distracting.

If it were toned down a bit maybe it would help. Nothing wrong with the whole pic...its good and to be fair I am being over critical.

Just needs fine tuning and I think maybe that would be it.
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I really like this one mate,but i do find the light area on the Angel distracting,i would personally clone it to all black but hey that's just me.

None the less a cracking shot...
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