Dunstall farm track

chalky · #1 (**permalink**) 21-05-2008, 13:22

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taken while out walking with the adventure group spice in Dunstall Staffordshire

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**genese** · #2 (**permalink**) 21-05-2008, 19:40

Hi martin this reminds me of a constable painting very serene and relaxing to look at! the perspective works well drawing your eye down through the image! maybe needs a boost of some sort have you tried upping the reds just to see what happens ?

Tco · #3 (**permalink**) 21-05-2008, 21:22

I really like the edit mate. Kind of an ethereal feel to it. I would like to have seen a landscape version of this also. Gen is on the nose about the reds, but just a slight adjustment nothing too major.

Good post. maybe a lone figure on an old bicycle closer in would have made this advertising material...who knows.
A pleasing image by anyones standards.

**Ogofmole** · #4 (**permalink**) 21-05-2008, 21:27

Hi Martin, I like this one, I like the way that the track and fence draws into the image, and you keep looking harder to see what is at the end. Composition is good and it works well as portrait.

ukhero · #5 (**permalink**) 22-05-2008, 09:31

Lovely pic.. It reminds me of a picture on the front of a ladybird book.

The feel and the treatment and the subject matter all remind me of growing up in Cosford.

whatt · #6 (**permalink**) 25-05-2008, 02:24

Hi Martin .. like the way the dappled sunlight on the path/road looks .. and lovely sky with nice clouds .. it's one of those photos .. that makes u want to sit and look and stare down the path/road .. Thanks for sharing ...
Cheers
Else