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26-04-2008, 03:56 PM
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My real name is: Martin
Abbots Bromley Staffs, England
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Sunset tree
Photographers Comments
Tried to make the border complementary
Serious Critique Required: The photographer has requested he/she would like a more serious level of critique for this image to obtain more constructive critiscism from other members. Please make sure the comments you leave are indeed constructive and aim to help the photographer see the image from a different perspective and/or provide help and guidance to how the image can be improved.
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Primary Camera: Nikon,
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26-04-2008, 04:23 PM
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My real name is: Paul
Lennoxtown, Scotland
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You have really done well with this. The tree is perfectly paced in the frame, and has been silhouetted nicely. Personally, i would have perhaps darkened down the highlighted part of the sky heading out of the top/middle part of the frame (if you know where i mean), as this would have led to a nice 'natural' framing of the shot.
I am not keen on the frame around the photograph, as its possibly a little too imposing, but thats all personal taste. As far as the photograph itself goes, its something you should be proud of - i know i would be!
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26-04-2008, 05:29 PM
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My real name is: Captain Sensible
Carmarthen, Wales
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Very nice composition - restful. I see it is only f5.6. I would probably have upped that - you had it on shutter priority. Did you do that because you wanted the silhouette effect? The border is OK, but I think it needs to be a little lighter as the image itself is quite dark. A nice shot, well done.
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29-04-2008, 02:35 AM
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My real name is: Else
BC Canada, Outside of the UK
PhotoTopix Master
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Join Date: Dec 2007
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Hi Martin, good comp .. like the silhouette of the tree and that lovely sky ... and it really is fun to try different framing .. on photos .. Thanks for sharing. .
Cheers
Else
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