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Old 29-03-2008, 04:32 PM
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As the weather was so bad today, I thought that I would choose a indoor project. This is looking out of one of our upstairs windows, I thought that I had better include at least part of the window so that we knew that we were looking out at some lovely welsh weather. (Still it will keep the grass green).




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Hi Barry ... Think that you did the right thing by showing part of the window pane .. gives you the feeling that you are standing inside the room looking out . into the rain .. Yes it does keep the grass green.. These PP are really quite a challenge I find .. but enjoying the practice. Thanks for sharing ..
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Hi Else, thanks for your comment, originally I was just taking the shot through the window, but then when I looked at the final image and looked at the title 'Through the Window', so I thought that I had better try and include some of the window, then I had to decide which part of the window.
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