[PP] Windows For PP

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This is one windows but there are two panes to it. Hope this is ok to use for windows ...

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Else




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Theme: Windows
Light: On Camera Flash
Focal Distance: 200mm-300mm
Location: Indoors
Colour Type: Black and White

I like the goemetric shapes in this, but keep feeling there should be more. The radiating arms don't go anywhere and I'm left wondering how they terminate - is there an arch or something similar just out of frame? Also there is a lot of empty space - the image may have been a bit stronger if there was even a hint of something on the other side.

Peter

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Hi Peter .. there was something showing through .. but it was so blurred .. it was the house across the way from us with the black roof ..but .. it just didn't look nice .. in the photo .. maybe should do another one of this PP and see what I can do with it. Thank you for stopping by and commenting .. Just looking at it .. perhaps .. if I had added a frame to it .. that might help?? .. Not sure if we are allowed to do that. The window at the top has a curve to it and not sure why .. I didn't photo the whole window .. perhaps I couldn't move back far enough to fit it in ..
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