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Old 26-03-2008, 08:54 PM
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Elation - On camera flash -24-70mm - outdoors night - colour....




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Theme: Elation
Light: On Camera Flash
Focal Distance: 24mm-70mm
Location: Outdoors (Night)
Colour Type: Colour
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Very creative idea!
Can I suggest that your image might have more impact if there were less distractions in the background? ... plus it is not immediately apparent (to me, at least!) that there is (was!) cream in the container.... maybe choose a different container? Or something else to represent cream?
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