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Old 15-02-2008, 04:18 PM
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Just another shot taken locally to where I live. I am trying to draw attention to the gate, but does it work ?????



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I am trying to draw attention to the gate,
just a sign would do..lol
sorry mate friday afternoon and i've on my own ALL day. your stuff is really different on here, keeping a close eye on it after TCO mentioend your work, very creative and lateral thinking as well. With this shot, this light overall is a touch flat but the colours pull your eye away from the gate too quick.
overall your work is def art though.
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Well XP1 I gotta be honest, this one is not for me. Pic looks a bit out of focus/soft. The colour idea is a good one but I don't think it suits a countryside scene such as this.
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Points taken boys. Thanks for comments.
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I like the idea here but what i dont like is the hard cuts between the colours.. If you look along the top of the wall it looks like you have used this line to change from one colour to the other and that for me works... Maybe if you could do it on other planes also this would be even more interesting...
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I will have a go at something similar with your suggestion Nik.
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