Model Steam Engine - attempt 2

LoopyLou · #1 (**permalink**) 30-01-2008, 18:30

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Ok, so with notebook, tips from you fab intellectuals and ones manual, we went off to try again. Think this makes a much better shot, but please feel free if there are any further improvements i can make to this. Big thank you for the encouragement and advice.

PixL8 · #2 (**permalink**) 30-01-2008, 18:52

Steaming ahead now Loopy, I like the detail in this shot

**Ogofmole** · #3 (**permalink**) 30-01-2008, 19:07

This is a much better shot, although if you were still using wheels as your title, you will need to include all of the rear wheel I think. I also like the shadow under the engine.

**Photo Phil** · #4 (**permalink**) 31-01-2008, 12:28

Hi Lorraine,
Great colour, focus and lighting. But as suggested, the crop lets it down slightly. Now is the time to get a little more imaginative. Choose areas of the image and try selective cropping or re-photograph selective areas in macro to create abstract works of the whole.
Here I have done an example to start you off.
Regards....Phil

whatt · #5 (**permalink**) 01-02-2008, 05:15

Hi Lorraine .. excellent focus ... sure does help .. when people give you suggestions what to try.... and it does help .. everyone ... I have read their advice and will have to take notes.
Cheers
Else