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08-06-2008, 09:01 PM
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My real name is: Nik
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Classic Sepia Police Car
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Taken Sunday 8th June 2008 in West Park.
Very Sunny bright day.
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08-06-2008, 09:06 PM
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My real name is: Barry
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Hi Nik, Nice image, I like the angle that you choose, although I would have had a go at cloning out the vehicle to the left as I'm sure that there is enough trees there to clone in and grass from the right of the image.
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08-06-2008, 09:09 PM
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My real name is: Paul
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Hi Nik,
I do like this, the Sepia has worked well.
Like the low angle, composition,great DOP.
You have captured some great flections in the cars paintwork.
Not thinking much about the cars on the left, think it would look better with all that cloned out.
All the best
Paul
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08-06-2008, 09:09 PM
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My real name is: Dennis-AKA The Villa(n)
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Hi Nik, like the sepia suits the subject, like the angle as well as Barry says if poss ditch the other car! lovely car as well, a proper car. 
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08-06-2008, 09:23 PM
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lovely car as well, a proper car. 
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You have been watching to much 'Heartbeat' 
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08-06-2008, 09:40 PM
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My real name is: Nik
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Thanks guys glad you like, This is always the problem they bunch the cars up to close together and people will go look at them lol...
Will have a go at the cloning out when its cold and raining outside so that will be next week sometime then lol
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09-06-2008, 10:54 AM
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My real name is: Phil
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Hi Nik,
I also like the sepia effect. I gave it a quick go at the cloning as mentioned. It does look a lot better in a stand alone situation.
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09-06-2008, 10:57 AM
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My real name is: Dennis-AKA The Villa(n)
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Hats off to Phil that is a good job mate, never knew it was there would you. Does look better now.
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09-06-2008, 12:02 PM
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My real name is: Nik
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Cheers Phil top one.... Much better now... I have about 20 other car and truck pics for you lol
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