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Old 01-06-2008, 02:11 PM
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I LOVE your title!....it says it all!...I think your picture could be cropped some more...not sure where I would do it but I think you can afford to slice some off of the right, take off the black pictures on the wall. It would have been better in portrait format
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PS...I wanted a chance to tell you that I liked your self portraiture, I'll sneak it in here
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Don't know about the bloke, but the expression on the baby's face is priceless. Agree with Fay's comments re the cropping and format. I suppose you had to take it in a hurry. Babies don't wait.
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Really grateful for your interest and suggestions ( and for Fay's comment about the SP). Not cropping may have been subjective - the direction of the room in which he was looking contained a number of people including the parents and grandparents and I wanted them to be sensed as the object of his look. The painting is in fact blue but mono. looked better for the sake of the joke: the baby was actually clean and er fragrant!
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