Waiting for the lunch time rush

Photographers Comments
This was taken in Gerona Spain on a very cold day




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Hi there, This image was waving to me from afar...it's the reds and greys that did it. There are alot of lines going up trying to take my eye away from the dining area. When I crop off more from the top with my hand, I find that the diagonal line that leads me down the street and through the dining area, becomes much stronger

You could be right there Fay i'll give it a try

Really good composition, and good colours. Only criticism - if you had put an ND grad filter on at an angle of 45deg over the sky, you would have dampened down the bright sky a little, and got more light in the bottom left. Good image though.

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Like the composition and great colours. I think I understand why you kept the tree tops in this image but I prefer it cropped to just above the table parasols so my eyes follow the 3 great lines you've got in there without being distracted. Just my humble opinion though

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symmtery is great. like the composition.
also, loooovely colours