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Old 14-06-2008, 23:44
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Again another light source pic, in this ive been able to correct the previous error and the light doesnt come through the branches. However it still doesnt feel natural to me



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It does look more natural than the first shot, for me the central placement of the light is what's off putting, moving it back towards a corner, as in the first shot, might be better.
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Better than the first one Mate but am with you it's still not quite right???

Think what it is for me is that theres not actually a lot of light coming from such a bright source??? it's whited out it's that bright but a lot of the sky is pretty dark,and the two somehow don't go together???...
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