Template One

xp1 · #1 (**permalink**) 04-06-2008, 01:45 PM

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I am thinking of setting up shop producing what I would call alternative portraits. This is one template of about 20 which are all different types. This one is aimed at the young female poser or I could even replace female with male and alternate colours.
Any ideas and thoughts positive or negative about the idea/venture will be greatfully recieved. (Especially before I fork out any more cash).
Cheers

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cleano · #2 (**permalink**) 05-06-2008, 04:23 AM

Exciting shot! Effect works well, I like it.

xp1 · #3 (**permalink**) 05-06-2008, 08:16 AM

Thanks for the feedback cleano.
Cheers

G8PSR · #4 (**permalink**) 05-06-2008, 01:39 PM

Very futuristic looking, love the colours and concept.
I'm not really sure about the white glow all around the body, may need toning down a bit.
Great work.

xp1 · #5 (**permalink**) 05-06-2008, 06:10 PM

Thanks for the input mate

cyclone · #6 (**permalink**) 06-06-2008, 09:56 PM

I think it's a good idea, if you can test the water.
Definitely different, which I guess we are all trying to achieve, is there some of my work in there?

JamieD50 · #7 (**permalink**) 06-06-2008, 10:43 PM

awsum.
again.

xp1 · #8 (**permalink**) 07-06-2008, 01:35 PM

Hi Cyclone, No there are no other Photo's involved in this type of sf. If there was I would have to pay you royalties would,nt I !!!. I have around 20 different types of sf which are totally different to what is being offered at the moment. Any way one can only try and test the water like you said.
Thanks for the feedback to you and JamieD50.
PS
Just opened the box about 1/2 hr ago and low and behold there,s a real camera with extra lenses and loads of other stuff that is totally alien to me. Will be playing for quite some time now.
Cheers

Mello · #9 (**permalink**) 07-06-2008, 03:34 PM

Sorry to get your hopes up but am not commenting,just wanted to say HURRRRAH on the purchase of your new camera as VIK & BOB would say "we really wanna see those fingers" (pressing the shutter button) i look forward to seeing the fruits of your loins i mean lense...

xp1 · #10 (**permalink**) 07-06-2008, 06:10 PM

Will see if it makes anydifference !!!. Got to work out what everything is yet let alone take pictures with it.
Cheers