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18-05-2008, 06:02 PM
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My real name is: Barry
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Mountainbiking in Infrared
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Took this shot last weekend at the Dragon Downhill Mountain bike race.
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18-05-2008, 06:36 PM
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Hi Barry as i know nothing at all about IR except what you have done in your tutorials, it is difficult for me to Crit. However what i see is a great action capture, too often it is a very close zoomed in shot and this one looks better for showing the slope and the terrain he is negotiating. Colour or IR this is a great image. Wish i had taken it and i would have been chuffed to bits is all i can say.
Loved every one of your IR images so far mate, top man!
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18-05-2008, 07:11 PM
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All I can say is superb love what you have done here.
Bryan.
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18-05-2008, 09:04 PM
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My real name is: Barry
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Hi Dennis and Bryan, cheers for your comments, I just thought that I would try something different from my normal landscape type shots.
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19-05-2008, 07:32 PM
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Hi Barry,
another amazing shot, I actually prefer this to your landscape shots.
You have captured the action really well.
Great work.
All the best
Paul
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19-05-2008, 07:51 PM
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My real name is: Barry
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Thanks for your comments, on this image, it is the first time that I have tried sports type photography in Infrared, It took me a while to find a suitable location with a darker background behind the rider, otherwise he would just be lost within the foliage of the trees.
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19-05-2008, 08:40 PM
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My view is very different. My first thought was that the white foliage is kinda overpowering the rider..but I find that disapates when the sky portion is cropped off. I totally love what is happening in the forground and I also find that by cropping off the sky, everything becomes more balanced. I understand why you included the sky but for me, it becomes a stronger image with it gone.
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19-05-2008, 09:02 PM
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My real name is: Barry
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Originally Posted by fayswon
I also find that by cropping off the sky, everything becomes more balanced.
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Hi Fay, thanks for your comment, until you mentioned it I had not even thought about cropping down. This image is in my file awaiting for a couple more before printing, so once printed as a whole image I may well play about with cutting different size mounts.
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21-05-2008, 09:24 PM
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Mate Fay has spoken what i would have said. I love your IR work and its nice to see you trying it on other subject matter.
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21-05-2008, 09:31 PM
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Hi TCO, thanks for your comments, this print should be here in the morning from Photobox, so I will play around with mounts, then if it works better cut down as suggested I will get it reprinted cropped and resized.
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