[PP] A Dom and her Slave!

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A photo for a working Dom




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This image was specifically created for a Personal Project created by our project randomiser. This photo was created using the following randomly chosen criteria:

Theme: Fetish [F]
Light: On Camera Flash [F]
Focal Distance: 24mm-70mm [F]
Location: Indoors [F]
Colour Type: Colour [F]

For once, I am completely speechless.

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Excellent sense of movement. Would have been nice if the tools of the trade were a bit sharper to add some contrast and the lighting is a little flat. All in all a good image just lacking a tiny bit in intensity for such a strong subject matter. Maybe mono would have been a better option ? who knows. Needs something though.

Nice work.

A interesting image, of which more come be made of. I like the composition, but as already mentioned the background needs to be sharper (I presume that a tripod was not used). You have caught a good sense of movement within the image with the models. Look forward to seeing more from you as I'm not allowed to take shots like this .

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An interesting image, conveying a story of an image with deeper meanings. As stated before, it would have been good to see the bg sharper.

As a sub note, I feel that this one is bordering on the edge of nudity and it may be beneficial to all if any future submissions of this type were to be submitted to the nudity gallery, to save the embarrassment of those who do not wish to view this type of material.

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Regards....Phil

If it moves shoot it. If it doesn't move, still shoot it.

subject matter like this i would agree phil

A conv to bw would make this really happen. i like the movement. like the limited view of the face. i would have to disagree re BG though. i feel the "chap" in the foreground is too much in focus and the BG could do with more blur. the sharpness of the foreground detracts from the overall shot as it pulls you eye but is not the best part of the shot

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Thanks for all the comments. Barry you are right a tripod was not used, as I was working around a camera crew in a really tiny room. I will play around to get a sharper bg images. I have a lot of sharp bg images taken from the shot and see what I can do in photoshop.