Citrus Cube

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have a play with a kindly donated template :-)

Lisa

Interesting shot, but a couple of points if you don't mind.

If you make the background of the top plane a dark grey, rather than black the shape of the cube will be more three dimensional.

The orange would have more perspective if you used the transform tool. Is that how you applied it to the cube plane? It may be due to the colour of the plane making it look flat.

Good idea.

Rob

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Nice idea lisa,but i do agree with rob i would have made all 3 sides slightly different shades so it keeps it shape(the darkest fruit with the lighest side/mid with mid/then the light fruit with the darkest side ????.....

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the fruits really stand out against the blacks well here. a touch brighter with the box but i wouldnt worry too much about it as processing images like this you'll have a learning curve that great. well done you!!!

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another go... moved them around a bit, had to leave the lime as it was as couldn't separate it from its background being very dark green in places. i agree it looks more 3d with the alteration in background tones.

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Much better job than the original Lisa!

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Much better, Lisa. The fruits look more in perspective, and the cube is more 3D. Nice, enough to eat.

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I like the second one better. These templates are going to be fun to play with. I am still learning but enjoy playing and experimenting. It will be fun to see what esle we can come up with. I will be looking forward to see more. Art

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Much better Lisa.......

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