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07-03-2008, 07:34 PM
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My real name is: Lorraine
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Thought i would try something a little different with this and used a solarise option in PS. Be gratefull for any and all comments as to whether it works or not. Many thanks, Lorraine
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07-03-2008, 07:43 PM
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My real name is: Barry
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Hi Lorraine, I like the composition and the way that the road leads you into the image, but personally I don't think that the solarise option has improved this image. It's all of those pink bricks.
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07-03-2008, 07:50 PM
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My real name is: Andy
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Hi Lorraine
Hi Lorraine,
I like the effect you have used - (is it poster edges?) I like the way it brings out the texture in the cobles. I personally think that the saturation is too high, if you lower the saturation you will get a more earthy feel and the oranges and sky will not be so intense. I like the way you have brought out the detail in the shadow area - that is obviously quite a dark area in the original pic so you have done a good job there and the composition of the image is great.
nice pic.
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07-03-2008, 08:02 PM
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My real name is: Ken
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I like the composition and the details are very good, I like the effect on the stone road and the building I think the pink may be distracting, taking away from your picture, you could select those areas and change the color using hue slider or color balance.
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08-03-2008, 01:58 AM
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My real name is: Else
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Hi Lorraine. . good to try different things in PS .. they don't always work .. out perfect but u learn from it .. I like what it has done to the street .. road .. ? but not keen on that pink in the bricks ..
Cheers
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08-03-2008, 03:15 AM
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It is alway fun to try diffent things. I like the lead in the photo and like the way the detail shows up. Maybe just take the saturation down just a little or recolor the pink in the pebbles..
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09-03-2008, 09:12 PM
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My real name is: Alan
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Good effort Loopy and nice composition
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10-03-2008, 01:46 PM
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Very powerful lead in lines Loony girl. Great overall shot its just the pink bricks take the edge off of it for me too chum.
Nice shot.
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11-03-2008, 06:45 AM
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My real name is: Gordon
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Love the cobbles.....love the comp. maybe a little too saturated...but hey a nice overall result..... 
Gordon.
If we dont give it a go...We will never know..!!!
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17-03-2008, 03:58 PM
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My real name is: Lorraine
Kent, England
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Thank you all for viewing and the comments, i did struggle due to the lighting to get the right colouring/saturation effect. I'll have another go and try to see what i can do re the pink bricks/roof tops and i'll also post the original too. Big huge thanks again, practise makes perfect and it was fun to try a different effect.  Glad you all like the leading lines, it's something i've been trying to work on with regards to composition etc.
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