The Demom Temptress

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Staircase at Osbourne House, Isle of Wight, Model from a shoot at Lampeter, Mid Wales.




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Hi Annette, i really like this, however would also like just the staircase which leads you through the picture and makes you think what is waiting up there?? You almost want to try and see what is on the top balustrade area.

I personally think this works and i generally dont like selective colouring.

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I really like the dramatic perspective on the stair. For the title, I think the model should have a different body language. Here, she looks like a bundle of sweetness, without a strong measure of confidence. I think the image would have more of a finished look, if there was some stonework between her feet and the bottom of the image. I'm finding the light 'thingamajigs', at the top of the image are pulling the eye to the top of the image, too fast.