black_box_2

xp1 · #1 (**permalink**) 03-07-2008, 02:44 PM

Photographers Comments
Another shot of the black box this is from a different side and has had different treatment plus original sky.

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**Dennyboy** · #2 (**permalink**) 03-07-2008, 03:15 PM

Hi XP love this one, like the clouds in the glass, nothing i dont like about it. well done mate! one tiny tiny thing and its not anything about framing e.t.c i would get rid of that imperfection in the glass right on the third way up the image third in (see edit)

Other than that i like it mate

Tco · #3 (**permalink**) 03-07-2008, 03:34 PM

Another nice one buddy.
Only thing that spoils it a tiny bit is the window rubber/thingy hanging out and the grime on the lower panel. Not your fault..blame the lousy building maintenance guy!! (he should be sacked!

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xp1 · #4 (**permalink**) 03-07-2008, 06:39 PM

Thanks for the comments guys. I noticed the window part hanging out but I said to myself I would not mess about with this one. Thanks for the well needed feed back.
Cheers

**Dennyboy** · #5 (**permalink**) 03-07-2008, 06:46 PM

Hi Mate, on record saying dont edit if possible, however that little bit of rubber spoilt the picture and would soon have that away! Nice one anyway, like buildings and stuff