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Old 09-05-2008, 08:34 AM
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This house is about a mile away from the road on the way out of bath going towards bristol and wanted to take a few snaps of it for ages so stopped and took a few night shots on my way home last night useing my 70-300mm lens.



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Fantasic sky mate. But the shot looks out of balance for me. If you ever frame it it will lose even more image at the bottom.
I like the exposure and the idea is there, but its not quite hitting the mark for me.
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I've got to agree with Tco, i'm afraid. While i can see what you were trying to achieve, the composition is unbalanced and therefore loses impact
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no problem guys i was not sure what to do at the time so i took pictures up close far back in the middle and so on and for some reason they were all lacking something which is why i went for this picture as it has a little more to it other than just a house with light on it.
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Why not give it another go? and i know it might be breaking the rules of photography but what about sticking the house in the middle and a letterbox crop?....
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