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20-04-2008, 05:07 PM
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My real name is: Phil
Flintshire, Wales
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Harwarden Bridge Flintshire
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I am trying to photograph a series of bridges along the river Dee Flintshire. I felt that the style, age and contrasting elements within this image deserved the b/w treatment.
Serious Critique Required: The photographer has requested he/she would like a more serious level of critique for this image to obtain more constructive critiscism from other members. Please make sure the comments you leave are indeed constructive and aim to help the photographer see the image from a different perspective and/or provide help and guidance to how the image can be improved.
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20-04-2008, 05:53 PM
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My real name is: Captain Sensible
Carmarthen, Wales
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I like the shot, it has a powerful structure, but I think it might have looked better with the nearest span going right into the TR corner. That would have given the image more height, which would have put the strong line created by the railings lower down at the third line. It doesn't need much. I had a look at the histogram, and it looks a little flat-line across the image - perhaps a touch more contrast? I like the overall structure, it ticks all the right boxes. It does look dated as you desired.
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20-04-2008, 06:13 PM
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My real name is: Phil
Flintshire, Wales
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Thanks Rob,
your points and oppinions are much appreciated.
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Regards....Phil
If it moves shoot it. If it doesn't move, still shoot it.
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