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Old 11-02-2008, 12:15 PM
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Some renevated flats as seen from The Wolf offices second floor Mander House Wolverhampton... The colour strips slowly change colour. I still would not want to live there though lol... C&Cs welcomed.



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Hi Nik, nicely composed image, seeing the rest of the town behind gives it a bit more height. Might be worth trying to clown out the rooftop in the foreground which would give the buildings more height.
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Like the colours & tones Nik, I would have gone for a crop too, but in a different way, taking the sky out at the top of the weather vane & taking out the roof in the foreground, so giving an allmost panoramic effect...
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The colors are what drew me in. I would also crop the bottom of the shot to remove that roof. Of course you will have to move your signature.
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Hi guys thanks for the crit's.. I know what you mean about the crop from the bottom infact I did remove some from the bottom edge but I left those in to show that it was above other buildings... I thought this might add to the hight, where if I croped or cloned them out then who knows how far of the ground it was lol... All personal taste though and have taken your ideas on board. Thanks again
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Like the colour a lot on this one Nik. Also that lovely compressed perspective look that it has. I could have sworn it would have been done with a long telephoto but the exif says I am way off.
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I did take it on my 300mm but there quite big so I guess did not need all the lens. Thanks Tco glad you like...
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