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Old 01-06-2009, 20:28
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Tired for a different angle on this one - was layed on me stomach with camera as low down as possible to get the shot.

Deliberately left the fella walking away on the left and the kids on the Angels feet to give sense of scale.

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Old 01-06-2009, 20:40
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Hi Spooky like all the things you say but it looks like its suffering from the wide angle curse converging verticals the angel is leaning back and the fence leaning in. If you liked the angles mucho apologies! Have transformed in free transform command, liked the low angle.
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Old 01-06-2009, 20:48
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Hi Spooky like all the things you say but it looks like its suffering from the wide angle curse converging verticals the angel is leaning back and the fence leaning in. If you liked the angles mucho apologies! Have transformed in free transform command, liked the low angle.
Hello you down there! I got to admit I am now torn between both my original and your edit... LOL, but am thinking more towards your edit - ty for your input on this one mate - glady appreciated :

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