This is a critique from a novice. This makes me drool to advance into this stuff. The color mapping is stunning and magnetic. Compositionally, I feel like the little lady is overwhelmed..to the point, she almost looks incidental but I notice that by cropping off the carpet stains, this does make her more the subject. I like how the light is shining on the table leg but I find that it is competeing with the lady..the eye keeps being drawn there.