This really is a 1950's movie still...but this time I love it. A tiny bit more contrast and you are there. I am a HUGE fan of film noir. This is typical of that mate. Hard directional light and deliberate shadows cast across the face...bloody fantastic. My top three fav films are demonstrative of this kind of light:
Sin city
The Third Man
The Big Combo...

Bloody great mate.

I know its probably not what you were trying to do but you did it..