I think the potential was very good here for a great shot. But there are one or two things that detract a little. The light between top and bottom seems too out of balance - her hair blends too much with the dark background, and her jeans are a little blown out. Her hands are nice, but they look a little clumsy, as if she didn't know where to hold them. Am I being too critical? Sorry. She is a pretty girl.

Edit: sorry, need to qualify what I said. I do like the look of the shot, the texture and feel of it is very good, but I think it shows very well how you need to think very carefully about the detail of all shots. It could have been excellent.

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