Colin, here goes, my first thoughts are its blurred and would look better with a very small border to hold the flower in the frame if that makes sense. It is also a bit flat. Being constructive if possible put the camera on a tripod, cant see what shutter speed you used as no EXIF. either you have camera blur from a slow shutter speed and the camera moved. Or the flower moved in the wind. If you meant it blurry i apologise!

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