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Old 23-06-2008, 19:45
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Hi Len,

You have a very strong subject here. The red is striking and the reflection in the water is good. The backdrop of buildings is attractive. I'd prefer that you weren't quite so close in though with the framing. Perhaps some more space on the left for the boat to move into (a good third more at least) and some more surrounding environment e.g. what was along the dockside in the way of buildings, dockside paraphernalia etc

Just my $0.02 Dave B.
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