Cleano please do not be offended. You have asked for honest crits.

I have enjoyed many of your images, you are a very good photographer and a nice person!

This for me does not please my eye. The colours are very gawdy and oppressing for my personal taste. You may well find other members who like this. but for me it is not to your usual standard my friend.

I am sorry as I hate doing negative crits but I think I would have prefered the original imge.

I myself fall foul to images that I am convinced are right but are not. Of course there is no right and wrong but this is not for me sorry. Though i really do admire your work.

Tco