Hi Xp1,
I am undecided as to whether I like the effect. As you have stated it has been re-worked from a holiday snap in a bar. Cudos to you for the finished result from that. ie: probably a dimly lit area using on camera flash. probably having a drink so red eye would have been prominant and if the photographer had also been drinking, a little camera shake perhaps. The finished image has a novilty appeal, but not an effect as stated before that I personally would employ. Perhaps if I keep returning to it, it will grow on me. Keep it going mate, you do knock out some very creative work.

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Regards....Phil

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