Ey Up Lyke....
bw is my fav mate but crop in a bit more on the RHS. Brighten the faces ever so slightly..poss crop the top as well
colour is good but needs to be punchier, duo's not working for me altho no.2 is ok. watch out for bold patterns like her top as they can be distracting to the eye.
having said all that, portraits of children are chosen for the emotion the give to people and how they make them feel. These 2 little cuties look great and they appear really relaxed for me mate

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