Maine Coon Cat Club?....is this in the States?....
Yes, the eyes are out of focus but I think you did the right thing by a tight crop because the muzzle is in such sharp focus:..this way it makes it look like this is intentional. People will love the selective color, which also brings the eyes to see that the muzzle is the subject. If you get on the calendar, I would love to know. I'm going to google this club