Fiona,

I like this very much. I find the lighting is a bit harsh on his face, but I think I can see what you were trying to do. The conditions could not have been ideal. I like the inset framing which seems to be of a different focus - may I ask how you did that? Good to see someone shooting ordinary people rather than all the glamour stuff! Very good effort.

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