I like the goemetric shapes in this, but keep feeling there should be more. The radiating arms don't go anywhere and I'm left wondering how they terminate - is there an arch or something similar just out of frame? Also there is a lot of empty space - the image may have been a bit stronger if there was even a hint of something on the other side.

Peter

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