I really like the dramatic perspective on the stair. For the title, I think the model should have a different body language. Here, she looks like a bundle of sweetness, without a strong measure of confidence. I think the image would have more of a finished look, if there was some stonework between her feet and the bottom of the image. I'm finding the light 'thingamajigs', at the top of the image are pulling the eye to the top of the image, too fast.