Very 70's look about this one.
I think the 70's yielded some of the finest photogs ever with some remarkable pictures taken.
I agree totally with Donkey boy Andy on the arms point and the silver look of the lower necklace draws my eye away, the crease in the backdrop tells me she was a little too close to it.
This said and done she is a lovely girly and the lighting is good if a little bland. The other girl was much more appealing to me technically speaking. Both beauties and you have been a lucky so and so to even be in the same room as them.
Also I do like the shots you have done of your mates that have yet to grace the crit forums. You have done a splendid series of shots and we had a good chuckle here at the personalities that were apparent from your shots...good work mate.