I find myself looking at the cake and my eye goes straight off on the RHS without anything to bring it back again. As someone mentioned, try keeping all in or crop closer.
the technical aspect for me is great. as said above, good DOF sharpness etc.. bring on the final shots and lets all get hungry!!

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