its clean and sharp Fay nice colour etc but i think the angle for me is wrong.. And also would have licked a little more light on the fruit. I am looking at it from the POV of say on a menue showing a desert option.

Taking a lower angle but still including the top would make it look bigger as the cake would dominate the shot a little more.

But that said it looks good enough to eat....

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