Got to agree with Nik here it would probably look alright on the front cover of a wine menu,
but as for the treatment that you gave it this arty feel (and I must admit something that I have never done so know nothing of) and not having seen the original makes it harder to comment as well but something just tells me that some other photo would have made a better subject matter for this treatment, but then I could be wrong also. Post up the original.

Cheers,