Hi Andy .. Love how you are honest..and it really does help me think about things and what types of photos that I do post. Hate it when people pussy foot around and not give honest opinions. I appreciate it all .. and would rather have a good evaluation of what the photo is like to others!! I can see what you are saying ..Andy no real focal point.
I have never hated anyone in my life, it is excellent that you have taken the time to do a honest critique. I wish the people would do this more often myself, I am a big girl and no one ever hurts my feeling by being honest!! I appreciate the time that you have put into this evaluation ...
Bet you were thinking . oh oh . have I put my foot into it .. !! No you haven't at all!! 
Cheers
Else